Perfect Story

Six Word Story
On Flickr I learned about a story, apocryphal or not about Hemingway:
Ernest Hemingway was once prodded to compose a complete story in six words. His answer, personally felt to be his best prose ever, was "For sale: baby shoes, never used." Some people say it was to settle a bar bet. Others say it was a personal challenge directed at other famous authors.
Can you write a six word story and post it in the comments? I'm still working on mine, which contains the word "Leave" so far.

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{ COMMENTS }
Belongings scattered beside lipstick-stained sheet.Andrew Parker September 26, 2006 8:59 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
"She eats her ice cream passionately."
What a great challenge; I ended up diving into the pool!Amie Gillingham September 26, 2006 9:16 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Lucky, yes, but my twin wasn't.scot September 26, 2006 9:30 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Leave that alone; remember Mary's scab.Dean September 26, 2006 10:20 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Talent drowning in files still dreams.Haken September 26, 2006 10:38 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I loved; I lost; I'm sorry.SlashChick September 26, 2006 11:32 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
In Gore Vidal's book "The City & The Pillar" he writes in the opening chapter:
"He was home. He was lost."
I heard those six words whispering in my head the entire rest of the book. Ted Rheingold September 26, 2006 11:54 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Hard!
- Spring thaw frees the packed canoe.- Her heels hit Wall Street first.- For sale: halves of a bed.Dennis September 26, 2006 12:57 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
That was how winter came that year. Cormac McCarthy - The Orchard Keeper ...
has 7 unless i cheat
That's how winter came that year.
I love this line. silver13-rose September 26, 2006 2:36 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Not anyway near as elegant at the Hemmingway example. But somehow sad ones seemed easier than happy ones:
She loved again. I never did.Our love survived time, not cancer.Life's end: Sadly recalling opportunities lost.
Nikolaj September 26, 2006 2:51 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Table overturned, it painted a life.Kim Fox September 26, 2006 3:36 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Reminds me of something I once read - I forget where. The shortest sci-fi story ever:
"The last man on Earth sits in his house. There is a knock at the door."
Always love that.Derek Powazek September 26, 2006 5:44 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
and then she went to sleep.Linda September 26, 2006 11:04 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
She watched the world end.
Again.Chuq Von Rospach September 26, 2006 11:20 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
switched lifestyle from planet to satellitejorge September 26, 2006 11:22 PM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Stewart's money, gone; her love, undaunted.Travis September 27, 2006 1:39 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
—Adam, apples are delicious!—Uh oh.misteraitch September 27, 2006 4:29 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Downloaded it, learned truth, gave up.Floridora September 27, 2006 4:31 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
My ancient history prof said the world's story could be summed up as:
They lived, they suffered, they died.Mike September 27, 2006 6:37 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
We will be living in cars.
m.graywyvern September 27, 2006 7:29 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
(Almost forgot to add my 6-word story.)
"She said nothing could go wrong."Derek Powazek September 27, 2006 7:32 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Walking home, she regained her virginity.Jim Lyon September 27, 2006 9:34 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
"No," she said. "Ah," he said.Total September 27, 2006 11:24 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
It wasn't her fault. Not entirely.
The audience applauded, as he wept.Tom Bridge September 27, 2006 11:26 AM . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
It wasn't her fault. Not entirely.